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THE PEBBLE CHAMPION - Feature Screenplay

 

WINNER: BEST SCREENPLAY

"A bittersweet script, full of wonderful passages
and an authentic feel to the storytelling.

Overall, The Pebble Champion is a great script, full of emotion,
reflection and great characters."

Judge's Comment, Chicago Feedback Film Festival, 2024

The screenplay version of my novel, The Pebble Champion.

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Logline
Thrust into a new life with a father he's never met after his mother's tragic death, 15-year-old Chris wrestles with loss and the turmoil of adolescence, finding solace and self-discovery through the simple act of stone-skipping on a small island.

Pitch:
The Pebble Champion" is a tale of hope and recovery. It portrays the strength found in human connections and the transformative power of embracing new beginnings. Through the metaphor of skipping pebbles, the screenplay emphasizes the importance of perseverance and the quiet strength that comes from overcoming grief. That the 15-year-old protagonist happens also to be dealing with his sexuality and identity adds nuances, layers, and complexity to the narrative.

Synopsis:
The script revolves around Chris, a 15-year-old who has just lost his mother in a tragic car accident. Transplanted to a new school, Chris finds a warm welcome from friendly classmate Thane, who takes Chris under his wing. and they become in many ways inseparable. Yet, plagued by feelings of grief and guilt over his mother's death, Chris is also grappling with an even more profound and existential reckoning with his own identity.

Though he develops a powerful crush on an unavailable girl, his more passionate feelings emerge, unexpected and uninvited, toward other boys. Rejected and belittled in the past when he tried to express those desires, Chris feels isolated and lost – until a glimmer of hope emerges in a handsome new acquaintance. Through the simple act of skimming pebbles across the waters of Shanklin Beach, and the reconnection with his estranged father, Chris learns to let go of the weight of the past and to confront his bewildering desires.

Why "The Pebble Champion" Will Resonate:

1. Universal Themes: The story addresses universally relatable themes such as identity, loss, and the quest for self-acceptance, making it appealing to a broad audience.
2. Emotional Depth: The script delves deep into the emotional journey of a young boy dealing with profound grief and identity struggles, offering a raw and authentic portrayal of adolescence.
3. Metaphorical Resonance: The recurring motif of skimming pebbles adds a layer of symbolic depth, reflecting Chris’s growth and redemption, making the narrative both visually and emotionally compelling.
4. Dynamic Characters: Chris and Thane's relationship, along with other supporting characters, brings depth and authenticity to the narrative, ensuring a strong emotional connection with viewers.
5. Cinematic Potential: With its evocative settings and powerful emotional arcs, "The Pebble Champion" promises a visually and emotionally engaging cinematic experience.

"The Pebble Champion" will captivate and move audiences, providing a thought-provoking and heartfelt tale that stands out in the drama genre. A rare script that deals intimately with dealing with grief from a teenager's perspective.

• “One of the best specs out there.” (Chicago Feedback Film Festival, 2024).
• "A heartfelt, imaginative script with relatable themes of loss, identity, and resilience.” (Script Coach)

 

ONE OF US - Short Screenplay

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"Rich with detail and many touches. 'One of Us' is a moralist's delight...

There's room for actors to really enjoy the experience."

Judge's Comment, Paperscreenplay, 2022

Concerned that they might not get the best grades for the upcoming examinations, four boys at a  boarding school decide to break into the storeroom where their exam papers are held. ​Then one of the boys locks the other three in, and leaves.

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​Betrayed and knowing they will get caught red-handed, the three incarcerated boys must face their own demons as well as their problems with each other.

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‘One of Us’ is the screenplay adaptation of ‘Red-Handed’.

 

WINNER (Best First-Time Writer - Short Screenplay) at the Oxford Script Awards, UK, February, 2023

WINNER (Best Short Script + Best Dialogues) at the Travancore Intl Film Festival, India, July, 2023

WINNER (Best Short Screenplay of the Year), Rome Prisma International Film Festival,  July, 2022

WINNER (Best LGBT Screenplay) at the Cannes Film Awards, France, July, 2022

WINNER (Best Screenplay) at the Hollywood Just4Shorts Film and Screenplay Competition, November, 2022.

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NOMINEE/ FINALIST (Best Short Screenplay) at the Lonely Wolf International Film Festival, London, December, 2023

FINALIST, (Best Screenplay) at the Paris Screenplay Awards, Paris, France, 2023

NOMINEE (Best Screenplay) at the  Miracle Makers Intl Fillm Festival, Hollywood, USA, 2023

NOMINEE (Best Technique) at the Paperscreenplay Awards, London, August, 2022

FINALIST (Drama Screenplay Short) at the Red Flight Pictures Screenplay Awards, Philadelphia, USA, December, 2022

 

HONORABLE MENTION (Best Short Screenplay) at the Bowery Film Festival, New York, November, 2022

 HONORABLE MENTION (Best Original Script)  Athens International Monthly Art Films Festival, Greece, September, 2022

DRAGON LIST (Screenplay of Outstanding Qualityat the International Film Festival of Wales, November, 2022

SEMI-FINALIST, (Short Film Scripts) at the Cinequest Screenwriting Competition, California, USA, 2024

SEMI-FINALIST (Best Short Screenplay) at the Santa Barbara Intl Screenplay Awards, California, USA, May, 2022

SEMI-FINALIST (Best Short Screenplay) at the New York International Screenplay Awards, New York, USA, April, 2022

SEMI-FINALIST, Filmmatic Short Screenplay Awards, Los Angeles, August, 2024

QUARTER-FINALIST, New York Metropolitan Screenwriting Competition, New York, November, 2022.

OFFICIAL SELECTION (Best Short Screenplay) at the Los Angeles International Screenplay Awards, April, 2022

OFFICIAL SELECTION  at the Amsterdam Freedom Film Festival, August, 2022

OFFICIAL SELECTION  at the New York Script Awards, August, 2022

OFFICIAL SELECTION  at the Maverick Movie Awards, London, UK, December, 2022

OFFICIAL SELECTION at the Berlin Intl Screenwriting Festival, Germany, 2023

OFFICIAL SELECTION at the Screenwriter's Launchpad Series, Pinewood Studios, UK, 2023

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Logline
When four struggling students at a prestigious boarding school fear they won't make the grade on their final exams, they hatch a desperate plan to break into the exam storage room. But when one boy's unexpected act leaves the others trapped and exposed, the remaining trio must confront their own darkest fears and secrets as they struggle to survive the night.

Pitch

A gripping psychological heist drama that explores the consequences of betrayal and the complexities of teenage relationships. Set in a prestigious boarding school, the script follows four boys who are desperate to secure good grades in their upcoming exams. In a moment of madness, they break into the storeroom where their papers are held. But when one of them locks the others in and disappears, their plan goes awry.

What sets "One of Us" apart is its ability to delve into the psyche of its characters, exploring their fears and insecurities as they struggle to come to terms with their predicament. The tension between the three incarcerated boys is palpable, and their trust in each other is shattered, forcing them to confront their darkest secrets. As the stakes rise, they must find a way to escape before they are caught red-handed.

"One of Us" would be an excellent project for production companies to consider. The script is thought-provoking and has the potential to captivate audiences. With plenty of room for actors to really enjoy the experience, "One of Us" promises to be a powerful and unforgettable cinematic experience.


 

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White Sheet

"A fast-paced, boiling pot
of a one-act play."

RED-HANDED - One-Act Stage Play

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WINNER: Best Stage Play Script, London, 2021
WINNER: Best Stage Play, Miracle Makers Intl. Film Festival, Las Vegas, 2021
WINNER: Best Stage Play Script, 4th Dimension Independent Film Festival, Bali, 2021

"The curtain coming down sends an immediate message that you have just seen something profound."

Dtraslerwriting, LazyBee Scripts Appraisal

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